Changes between Version 3 and Version 4 of TracUsersClearance

Timestamp:

Feb 11, 2011, 10:17:49 PM (13 years ago)

Author:

Steffen Hoffmann

Comment:

revised English inquiry text kindly contributed by M.J.Wells from Ischus

TracUsersClearance

@@ -18 +18 @@
 subject: Inquiry regarding Trac usage update
 
-Dear Madams and Gentlemen,
+Dear Sir or Madam,
 
-according to http://trac.edgewall.org/wiki/TracUsers you've declared,
-that you did use Trac software in the past, or someone else did so on
+According to http://trac.edgewall.org/wiki/TracUsers you've declared,
+that you used Trac software in the past, or that someone else did so on
 your behalf.
 
 Since there is no public Trac according to my research and I can't find
-other evidence for Trac usage at the current website as well, I do
-request kindly, that you declare yourself regarding current Trac usage,
-at least internally. Further information/short usage summary would be
-perfect.
+other evidence for Trac usage at the current website, I kindly request
+that you let me know your current Trac usage, at least whether you use it
+internally. Further information/short usage summary would be greatly appreciated.
 
 Please note, this is purely for reference, no commercial interests from
 my/our side. You don't need to declare anything, but I'll consider
-deletion of the entry in question after 10 days without feedback from
-your side.
+deleting the entry in question after 10 days without feedback from
+you.
 
-Thank you for taking care.
+Thank you for your time.
 
-Sincerely
+Sincerely,
 
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